lawlolawlstudios's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hero -first act-]

"Awesome animation"

Hahaha, saw something similar coming.

Awesome animation, very fluid, nice story. Things that could improve the flash:
-Lip syncing was slightly off, although not too bad
-Some scenes were extremely slow (i.e. villain raising then lowering arm)

[Super Mario bros Z ep.8 (old series)]

"nothing less than amazing"

I've never really been a fan of this series, but this episode.. was nothing less than amazing. I had thought that people appreciated these cartoons because of the characters/story/etc, but this episode proved me completely wrong.

Perfectly fluid animation, and awesome shots (perspective, etc.)

Enormous improvement.

[Pokemon Trainer Fight 2]

"clever, fluid, and just entertaining"

I must admit, the button with the weird hit box at the beginning left a strong first impression of this video. (took my about five seconds to hit that, maybe i'm uncoordinated, who knows?)

Nonetheless, the animation was clever, fluid, and just entertaining to watch. Nice work!

[Arctic Dispute]

Well done!

Really did appreciate the artistic style here. Action scenes were well made, and I also liked your use of different camera angles. It's nice to see the same shot happening from different perspectives (i.e. helicopter target, etc.)

A lot could be improved, of course, and although I don't want to complain about the length, it was a bit short.

Biggest thing your could work on OVERALL is making weapon turning more realistic, instead of tweening the weapon so that it's thinner. (Every time they turn a gun around, it looks like it's 2D). Might be cool to make it look as if you're going for 2D in the first place.

All in all, nice job.

[Rebuild Remal]

There's Potential!

This looks like it has some awesome potential, but content can still be improved.

The rebuilding process was excruciatingly difficult.. I'm sure others will agree. I looked at your hint in the description, tried placing the pieces in multiple places, and could get nothing out of it. I had to refresh the page a few times and start over in order to get it to work every once in a while.

What you have here is good, but can be made great. Making objects lock into place/etc, EVEN if the rebuilding is supposed to be difficult, will greatly improve gameplay.

Wikkiski responds:

Thanks, this is what I like to read. And believe me I'll take your advice.

[The Line Battle]

Interesting Idea

Although I've seen some frame-by-frame line animations before, I haven't heard too much of the lines actually fighting. I think what you have here is certainly a good idea, it can just be executed better. The background, for example, could have been interactive with the lines, and the FPS can be increased to enhance quality. Overall, nice work!

Bloodman101 responds:

Thanks!

[There She Is!! step4]

Awesome

Haha, wow I like this one a lot. I like your use of angles in the beginning, and the way you are able to convey emotions without words. Putting a bit of color in there to illustrate something important makes it look great too.Music fits in perfectly with the animation. You did it again!