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Perfeeect

Moving in and out, switching frames while perfectly synced to the music, great ending, awesome use of perspective. And, yes, I could tell that it was inspired by 2001, which made this all the more better. Awesome job.

th1rt3en responds:

I tend to think in film when I'm making a flash. I try to envision what I would do if I had an actual camera rather than a flat canvas, so I live for depth and movement.

"anims are very fluid and professional"

You're a really great stick animator.. and you definitely deserve some more recognition for your work. Your anims are very fluid and professional, and you have a grasp on going from image to image (going from the barrel of the gun to the black stick's head, etc.) I only found the mouths slightly awkward... it was alright on the blue guy, but I couldn't tell if the black guy was smiling at the beginning, and why he was panting so much. Came out really great, nothing to really complain about.

Jartemius responds:

OMG, WOW! It's awesome to hear it frobm you. I'm so proud... :3
Thanks a lot!

"really do like this a lot"

Dude, I love this. I really do like this a lot.

First of all, I can tell that you know what you're doing here. This "test" is better than most feature animations on Newgrounds. It's extremely enticing, and very original. It just works. It's funny in its own way.

Nice job!

someplaceelse responds:

Thanks! The "test" is only half true. I really never tried to add any storyline, and I tried to try out a few things, but I did put more effort then most "test"s I do.

There's Potential!

This looks like it has some awesome potential, but content can still be improved.

The rebuilding process was excruciatingly difficult.. I'm sure others will agree. I looked at your hint in the description, tried placing the pieces in multiple places, and could get nothing out of it. I had to refresh the page a few times and start over in order to get it to work every once in a while.

What you have here is good, but can be made great. Making objects lock into place/etc, EVEN if the rebuilding is supposed to be difficult, will greatly improve gameplay.

Wikkiski responds:

Thanks, this is what I like to read. And believe me I'll take your advice.

Interesting Idea

Although I've seen some frame-by-frame line animations before, I haven't heard too much of the lines actually fighting. I think what you have here is certainly a good idea, it can just be executed better. The background, for example, could have been interactive with the lines, and the FPS can be increased to enhance quality. Overall, nice work!

Bloodman101 responds:

Thanks!

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