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"really enjoyed the game"

Everything looked really great, and I really enjoyed the game, but how come a button in Storage III allows you to go anywhere in the game?

Seems extremely System Shock inspired, then again, that's what I searched for in order to come across this game. System Shock game = win.

If I were you, I'd consider remaking this with your current skills.. it would be ridiculously awesome.

Cool concept, good execution

I really enjoyed this, it was as if the Disney Haunted Mansion was reincarnated into flash form, in a sense.

The scenes were done well, and animation was great, but you could have focused a little more on interactivity. Clicking the candle is interactive, but having the player do more than just click would make the flash more entertaining, undoubtedly.

5/5

Entertaining

The graphics may have been lacking, but I found myself surprised at how much I was enjoying this game. I think you perfectly executed the death sequence, as in, there was no death sequence. It was nice just to spawn right when you died. I say you make a sequel, but put a TON (a TON) of effort into making your graphics look awesome. Throw in some other things too, like achievements.

Nice work!

Joshsouza responds:

i will think about that

Good Execution, Minor Glitch

It's a good idea, but the game is extremely easy. Although it starts off fairly difficult, if you manage to get the cloud to a certain size, you're invincible for the rest of the game. This is a common problem in these eat 'em up games, so it's certainly understandable. However, such a problem could be countered if levels were added, or if the world size scaled larger gradually, so that there were always larger clouds.

I can't submit my score of 79,000 that is going up as I type this.. because there isn't a way to die when the cloud is so big :(

Liked the music, nice work.

Fun and Very Decent

I feel that this game works, regardless of the fact that it doesn't have powerups, etc. because it progresses so rapidly. Instead of waiting for the next wave, it simply happens.

Almost every feature could be worked on, but this is a really decent game, and there isn't much to complain about at all.

Great start

First of all, nice job on your first! Right away, polishing up the background would make it better. Instead of just colored blocks, you could have a variety of backgrounds that the user can change. It'd also be nice to see an interesting interface/menus/etc. Because there are a lot of dress-up games out there, aim for originality, and essentially go where nobody has gone before.

Awesome

It's easy to tell that you've put a lot of effort into this game. The platforms all look sleek and clean, as do the objectives and the characters. The physics are also great, and really fun to simply play with.

Great work!

Great artistic style, entertaining gameplay.

Despite what your other reviews claim, this game isn't too difficult. Appropriate utilization of S to block makes the game challenging, but not hard. Music is great, scenery is amusing, and the flower death clip is just.. awesome.

I'm reviewing this four years after its release.. but ah well! Nice work!

Looks cool, but it still needs work.

The menu looked great, as did the characters and the field, but the gameplay wasn't exactly perfect. By holding down the spacebar, the player can simply run maximum speed. I assume you are trying to make it so that the bar increases based on how fast the player taps the spacebar. To do so, your code should listen for when the spacebar key is released, instead of when it's held down. Good demo so far, I look forward to the full game.

I'd like to see this in a game

There is most certainly a high demand for games like this... so it would be a great idea for you to make this into a full feature game. As for this experiment, I feel that it can oftentimes be difficult for the user to get the perfect mark. Perhaps widening the target area will do the trick? Overall great beta.

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